One of the most major events was the mauling. Cole had attacked the bear out of anger and fear since the bear wasn’t afraid of him. When the bear got attacked it attacked back for defense and then Cole was defenseless against it. After being attacked he was laying on the floor and while that happened he thought about himself.
The cause which made the bear
attack Cole was that Cole attacked it. After the attack Cole was laying on the
floor and thinking about himself. He had thought about everything and that made
him more understanding and changed his direction towards anger to the opposite
way. Since that happened Cole wanted to stay on the Island and get better. If
the mauling had never happened, Cole would have never changed his direction
from anger. He would have stayed the way he was and just grown worse. The event
was a major part in Cole emotions. The mauling might have done bad to his body
but did good for his mind.
I think that the beginning could have been a little clearer and you could have explained the story a little better. The end was very good though.
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