Friday, December 9, 2011

The Super Race

AUTHOR'S NOTE: You should look for the descriptive writing in my piece.

Roooom, roooooom, the car whirred with noise. The track was thundering with immense noise. Who was going to to win in this world cup. Was it going to be 3 time world champion Brian or the other 20 cars in the race.
We are in the final lap now with 3 cars in the lead neck to neck. Brian was one of them. The other was Don, the raising rookie, and lastly Neo, who won 5 state cups, was in the lead too. Who was going to win. they all have the new super car. The super car is the most aerodynamic car in the world with the best precision and it is also the fastest car in the world going at mach 10 speed. Some people had already gotten out of the game since this is a deadly track. There was just one problem for the racers. the last lap was a track in the sky. They are going to ride on planes and with hydraulics to get from plane to plane.
With all the danger their Don quit the race knowing that he didn’t have the skill. Neo and Brian was still in the game. When they were at the end with the finish line right in front of them, Neo was going at full speed, but then Brian kicked his car into Mach 11 with a turbo boost. Brian had won by a hair. This was a memorable race that would be known throughout history    

Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Talismans

AUTHOR'S NOTE: The topic I had chosen was because of something I had received in 4th grade and also because of a show I had watched before.

In a world where there are places that rain is like gold and other places where summer is cold, with winter being a nightmare, the people might go extinct soon if they don’t find a miracle. One day the gods that everyone believed in gave them hope, gave them a miracle. The gods had given them the talismans of power. They had the powers of the elements. There are 5 talismans of, fire for warmth, water for thirst and crops, lightning to get rid of the many creatures ruining lives, air for breathing in a place where ashes had lain, and earth for places without soil to grow crops. Each of the talismans were given to a different worthy man. Over the decades, people had forgotten about them with all the technology they possessed. Now 5 worthy people were protecting them from the evil that was growing, because in the wrong hands, they could be used to destroy the world instead of making it prosper.
Out of the 5 talismans we talked about, the first to be chased after by evil is the fire element. The evil that is trying to get the talismans, is the Shadow who leads an army of shadow warriors. The shadow had sent a dozen of warriors to get the talismans. The person guarding this talisman was Nick. Nick was a worthy man with many great aspects. He was honest, kind, generous, and hardworking. When Nick had heard of the evil coming, he mad a force-field out of fire, but would that hold off the Shadow. When the shadow warriors were close, he called for help. Who he called for help is a powerful force. He had called the other people with the talismans. He knew them well because they had met up a few times and now they were on their way.
Now that the other talismans were on the way, they would probably be able to hold off the evil, or would they have failed and made the job easier for the shadow by bringing the talismans right to him. When the warriors had gotten to the place where Nick was, they had gotten past the force-field easily. the other people used their powers to make force-fields, but that didn’t work either. If the force-fields couldn’t hold them off, neither would attacks. Was this the end of them and soon the world?
When the talismans didn’t work by itself, they took a different approach. The 5 people combined the talismans powers into one and then made one powerful force-field. The color of the elements together was amazing and elegant. It was like a rainbow, but a 100 times more mesmerizing. Could it hold the evil off.
After they had made the force-field, it had held off the warriors and when the shadow sent more it held them off too. The force-field worked and now the talismans were safe and so was the world. It was a great day. We had a victory that could compare to no other. A victory that saved the world.    

Sunday, December 4, 2011

Matrix

AUTHOR'S NOTE: The names are from the movie Matrix and Matrix inspired me to write a movie with those names.

In a world doomed to have chaos, there is one hope for mankind's survival. It has been called many things in the past like The Savior or The Hope. The name that it has been called the most is The Matrix.

"Aaagh!" yelled Neo. Neo was hanging on a cliff holding on for his survival. How he got to be in that state is a long story.

A few days ago Neo was an ordinary kid with school and sports. Then one day a man came to him. The man was mysterious and had a dark overcoat on him. The man had taken him to an alleyway where he then revealed himself. the man's name was Smith and supposedly he was a wizard. Then the most terrifying thing happened to him. The matrix itself was put inside of him.

After the Matrix was put inside of him, Neo yelled to Smith, "What did you do to me?" Smith replied, "You are the chosen one, so I put the Matrix inside of you."
"What is the matrix and how am I the chosen one?"
"The Matrix will save the world from aliens once they attack, which won't be long, by sealing them in another dimension. You are the chosen one because the High Wizards predicted that only you can withstand the greatness."
"You are insane!"
"Am I. Why don't you look up." that is when Neo saw a spaceship that was incredibly huge. After Neo saw the ship he believed Smith. Smith then told Neo that they had to get on the ship to seal the aliens. Suddenly a red light appeared from the ship. Neo found out it was a laser. They had to get on the ship before time ran out.

Now that Smith had said his purpose. the two were going to go to the ship. Smith suddenly went all weird and chanted "Smegonake, smegonake." 2 hovercrafts then appeared before the two. Neo thought it was Smith's magic, which it was. The two then went into the hover crafts and flew off to the ship.

When they got to the ship, there was hideous, blood thirsty alien in front of them. The alien was swift and quickly pushed Neo and Smith. That is how he got to be holding on for his life on the ledge of the ship. Smith got back onto the ship and chanted "Chokoleo, nazirito, chukana!" Now Neo was the one getting all weird. Neo was turned into a shade of blue and then A black hole opened up before their eyes. It sucked in the ship and aliens leaving Neo and Smith in the air falling down to their doom. Smith quickly said Bugatti and Neo and Smith were safe on the ground.

With all the action that went on in Neo's life, Neo was happy to be back in his normal life. Smith had disappeared after he saved Neo. Neo had went home after that. His parents had turned on the news which was talking about the aliens and mini black hole. Neo had made a new achievement that day. He helped save the world from doom.