Friday, December 9, 2011

The Super Race

AUTHOR'S NOTE: You should look for the descriptive writing in my piece.

Roooom, roooooom, the car whirred with noise. The track was thundering with immense noise. Who was going to to win in this world cup. Was it going to be 3 time world champion Brian or the other 20 cars in the race.
We are in the final lap now with 3 cars in the lead neck to neck. Brian was one of them. The other was Don, the raising rookie, and lastly Neo, who won 5 state cups, was in the lead too. Who was going to win. they all have the new super car. The super car is the most aerodynamic car in the world with the best precision and it is also the fastest car in the world going at mach 10 speed. Some people had already gotten out of the game since this is a deadly track. There was just one problem for the racers. the last lap was a track in the sky. They are going to ride on planes and with hydraulics to get from plane to plane.
With all the danger their Don quit the race knowing that he didn’t have the skill. Neo and Brian was still in the game. When they were at the end with the finish line right in front of them, Neo was going at full speed, but then Brian kicked his car into Mach 11 with a turbo boost. Brian had won by a hair. This was a memorable race that would be known throughout history    

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